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WIP-Ben (Feedback please!)

By Lauren, on September 7th, 2011

So here’s Ben so far. Needs more red tones, overall.  Gold scribble is a placeholder for trim I plan to draw.  I’m not sure I like the thick linework, I like the weight of the lines in his faux-hawk.  Thoughts, on the lines and in general?

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6 comments to WIP-Ben (Feedback please!)

  • moverlow
    09/07/2011 at 10:23 am · Reply

    I love this piece! The rich colors contrasting the skin tone and blonde hair are beautiful. I think the outline around the chin and ears could be cut in half and stil frame it nicely. I noticed more is the outline around the fingers. Because they are long and thin, the heavier line weight is in conflict and makes them look “chunky” instead of long and graceful. Beautiful, beautiful work.

    • Lauren
      09/07/2011 at 8:11 pm · Reply

      Thanks! Your comments keep along the same lines as other critique I’ve gotten, so I went with the general consensus and made changes.

  • moverlow
    09/08/2011 at 7:57 am · Reply

    Last critique of your personal work. Take care and I’ll see you on the 26th.

  • moverlow
    09/08/2011 at 12:43 pm · Reply

    Yeah, and I love looking at your work, for sure. But I don’t want you to get sick of me too quickly! LOL. ;-)

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