Type Portrait #2 versions 2A & 2B

So I did some editing on the last portrait, with some added and subtracted details, in hopes that it would be more “readable” as a human form.  I tried to remember: “Simple is best.  Usually.”  Personally, I believe these are stronger than the first version, especially the black and white version; I kept the green and white sections because I think it adds some flair and fun, and helps the composition in terms of where I want the viewer to focus – I tried the black and white one with a grey background, too.  What do you all think?

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